Providing Constructive Comments in Peer
Review In peer review, your job is to provide feedback that will help
other students. You can do this by remembering the 3 C's: be critical,
use courteous language, and make sure your comments are constructive.
You dummy -- how could you have expected to be able to conclude anything when
you changed two variables at the same time?
or
It's an interesting idea to change both temperature and lighting, but the results
would be easier to interpret if you had separated this into two experiments
rather than changing both variables at once.